What do you think of my song?
Different Me 04.20.09 At school, I study hard, get good grades and take a part Of whatever club I wanna be in But at home I sing, Sing my heart out And live like a rockstar Chorus I rock out, I stay out I'm a different kind of person I'm stuck at school which is like prison But I'm a different me at home I'm living on my own Don't wanna be bossed around Wanna do whatever I want When I'm all alone I'm stuck at home Doing whatever work I have Why is it me? I can't Go to parties, and stay out, do whatever I wanna But why? I just wanna be myself Repeat Chorus I gotta be good To stay in school I listen to takeovers, exclusives Special Acoustics But I'm a different me at home When I'm all alone I go online The computer's all mine On the weekends But studying, it never ends, it never ends Every day I practice Singing, just like this Chorus I wanna rock out, stay out And never have a bedtime I wanna be like a rockstar I'm just a different me at home Alone, in my room I'm a different kinda girl I'm a different me I wish I could have my own Laptop and phone Instead, I go to summer school While everyone else plays in the pool Getting up at seven A.M. Just wanting to play with all of them Wish I could just stop This mess and make it to the top I'm just a different me on the outside But inside I'm still the same An average teenage girl Living in a crazy world Feels so hard to stay in school Don't hafta be cool Just study, study, study It never ends, never ends I wanna be awesome And have some fun Just scream and shout everyone! We're gonna have some fun I'm a different me, don't you see? Living in two different worlds Having fun, and SHOUT!
i wrote this a long time ago, so it's not my best work. i just found it in my computer a while ago.
Its a bit childish but its good. I like the age group of 5-14 would love it :)
^ true, but it's good I like it! :3
haha i know. i wrote this when i was like 10.
i like that
I have to agree, a bit childish , but its good!
a bit childish but a good song tho :D
if,the school and studying and bedtime part was out. it's kind of childish
Not bad :)
^what they said, but I do think if uthis song does get out it'd be a hit cause it is really relatable.
just call it a song because of rims whor'e not going like poem; But as a song it is beautiful
just call it a song because of rimes whor'e not giving better in poem but like song it is very beautiful
not very good... when there is rhyming its very simple, i dont see any forms of metaphors, symbolism, etc.. seems like something Disney channel would play.
Eh, it's okay. Maybe a little childish.