Question

hmmmmm what do you guys think? My first ever poem! :P

Answer 1

The Blind Man Still Sees

The colors leap
In the back of my head
And flows behind my eyes
And even when I sleep
The dragons and stories come alive
Behind my gray eyes

I still see
I can seldom see through
Sometimes I can see more than you
I may be blind to you, but that is only what you see

Now with every journey that I take,
Cautious with each step I make,
Each becomes a quest of discovery,
Every movement teaching me.
The colors of our world escape all sight
But they still dance in my mind

As I exist in my eternal night,
I rely on nature to come alive,
The smell of roses and emanating sound
Play a role for all I have known

Black is my heart
Blue is my soul
Taking me apart
Devouring me whole
I lash out for what may not be
But then I remember the colors I still see

All the world is unknown
Caged inside my head
Fearful of what’s ahead
But still I see
Feeling the sun
I can imagine the colors
Blooming all around me like a warm hug
Others pity me
Some fear me
But I do not fear the world
Because I can see.
‐Sierra

Answer 2

I think it belongs in the English or Literature section.

Answer 3

welp i put it in the music section! :P

Answer 4

i like it... alot...

Answer 5

thanks bro! :D

Answer 6

welp, you obviously don't know the difference between music and literature.

Answer 7

BAHAHAHAHA alright no need to get hostile. I do know the difference, I view poetry as a form of music. plus there is plenty of ppl on here who post poetry in music. you keep ur oppion and i will keep mine. :)

Answer 8

I don't know what an oppion is but I don't know if I want to keep it. I'm just saying, is it really that hard to post your poetry in the literature section? I'd really like to converse about music instead of literature. The thing is, the only way to critique poetry is from a literary stand point. So, then why would you post it in the music section?

Answer 9

again i wanted to post it in the music section because i look at it as a type of music. if you wanna talk about music thats fine! I play 8 different instruments and go to berklee college of music so whats up bro!

Answer 10

That's awesome. Then why don't you ask questions about music instead of wasting your time with poetry?

Answer 11

OMG dude how many times do i need to tell you that i consider poetry as music! hence the post. lol and I dont have a lot of questions about music, im here to help others.

Answer 12

oh, well, I guess that just doesn't really make sense to me to consider literature music, but none the less I'm glad to see someone with an actual musical background in the music section so welcome.

Answer 13

lol thanks. :P

Answer 14

Great job, this is definetly peotry:)

Answer 15

aw thank you :)

Answer 16

your welcome!

Answer 17

OH MY GOD this is FREKIN AMAZIN.

Answer 18

yay!

Answer 19

welcome. ;)