Help with a thesis statement URGENT. So far I have...
Pride is good to have in your accomplishments weather it is in school, a job, or maybe even family. But too much pride can be hurtful to others so do not take advantage of it.
....but I dont believe this is a thesis statement.

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Help with a thesis statement URGENT.   So far I have... 
Pride is good to have in your accomplishments weather it is in school, a job, or maybe even family. But too much pride can be hurtful to others so do not take advantage of it.
....but I dont believe this is a thesis statement.

anonymous · Answer

see if this helps you http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/545/01/

anonymous · Answer

a teacher gave me that link and i had no idea what else to do. i just need it to be a thesis statment.. which i dont think it is.

anonymous · Answer

im un sure i mean to me it looks like one

anonymous · Answer

That looks like a good thesis statement.

anonymous · Answer

Thank you. !

anonymous · Answer

Your welcome