Is anyone available to help me with a writing assignment? I had been working on it earlier but my computer overheated and I lost all my data. I've been working on it and I would like some editing done if possible.

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anonymous · Answer

Feel free to add on...

anonymous · Answer

do you want the third paragraph or the attachment edited?

anonymous · Answer

The paragraph, I'm still working on the paper... its just a lot of work and I could use a hand haha.

anonymous · Answer

you dont have to use these comments, just suggestions to make it flow better :)

anonymous · Answer

How did you add comments o.o, would you like to see what I have so far, the intro needs to be a bit longer. That is if you would like to help.