Question

Will this introduction to my essay topic "why do I have to study" be ok if I put it?

"Studying is not about getting high grades, it's about how far you have become and what you learn in life." Probabl, some will think that they have to study because they want awards or recognition; some students say they have to study because they are pressured by their parents. But what's the point of studying when they don't enjoy it? Sometimes, most of us, students, lead to a question like "why do we have to study?" or "I can be anything I want but why do we need to study?"

Please help!