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Answer 1

For what?

Answer 2

How much time do you have to finish it ?

Answer 3

yes, I read it. I noticed this
Armenian culinary traditions date back about 200 years.
and then later this
Armenian Cuisine is as ancient as its history, as the land it is standing on.

those 2 statements sound contradictory.

meanwhile, I am thinking about how to make it longer.

Answer 4

I think you can add to the introduction.

I would start by explaining a little about Armenia. Where is it? How big is it ? Who lives there? How long has it been around ?

Even though you are going to write about their cuisine, it makes sense to explain more about Armenia. This intro should be about 300 words.

Answer 5

I would add a section on what they drink.

Answer 6

at the end, you might add a section on whether you can find Armenian restaurants..where people can try it.

Answer 7

it would be good to add info on this
Many Armenian people today still prepare these special dishes on religious holidays

Can you add a paragraph about these dishes? What are their names? what is in it. What makes them special ?

Answer 8

Yes, but more detail. What religious holiday are we talking about? Do they have different meals for the different holidays (like Thanksgiving Turkey and Christmas Ham) ?

Answer 9

oh ok!

Answer 10

If you can, I would write a paragraph on each dish that you think would be great to eat.
maybe the top three dishes... what is in it, how it's made...

Answer 11

You could add a section on the names of the dishes and how you pronounce them (or add this info when you write about a particular dish)

Answer 12

It is a lot of work to write up these things... I hope you can crank out some more words!

Answer 13

Good luck. Got to go.

Answer 14

thanks again!