Question

could someone please edit this paper?

Answer 1

do you still need help? if you do send me a message with the help and i will get back to you tomorrow. i can definitely help you. just to let you know i have to log off. so just message me the detts.

Answer 2

The first paragraph you wrote " a nation builder "
I think it should be capitilzed.

Answer 3

ok

Answer 4

You wrote in the first paragraph "working in group settings"
it would be better written as "working in-group settings" add the dash

Answer 5

ok

Answer 6

In the thrid paragraph, you wrote "engaged the best church that show this is Orange Chapel."
It would be in a good grammar if you wrote "church that shows"

Answer 7

Your essay is Awesome by the way :D
Barely has a grammar mistake.

Answer 8

Thanks, so you say I should write the sentence in the third paragraph, like this "the church that shows most civic engagement is the Orange Chapel"

Answer 9

Also, you need to learn more about MLA format, especially when you cite inside the essay.
Like for example, you wrote in the 3rd paragraph (McDaniel, 2013, p. 44).
Don't put the year or the word p. (page). It’s supposed to be written like this (McDaniel 44).

Answer 10

Yeah. Write it like that :)

Answer 11

Oh, well I'm doing APSA(Political science citiation)

Answer 12

is that the wrong format for in-text citation for APSA

Answer 13

?

Answer 14

It would work, i thought you were doing the MLA format.

Answer 15

oh, ok well no worries

Answer 16

Sorry for replying late, I was examining your essay.

Answer 17

That totally fine

Answer 18

“administrative duties which led to increase”

You wrote this sentence in the 4th paragraph. Well, if you want to write the word “which,” you need to put the comma before. “duties, which” or without that coma “administrative duties 'that' led”

Answer 19

I have to go run some errands right now, so I have to get offline, but thanks for proofread/edit my paper I really appreciate it

Answer 20

Ok, your welcome. thanks for the medal :)

Answer 21

I hope you can get through before tommrrow since its due by 5pm

Answer 22

no prob!

Answer 23

Ok. I'll see about that.

Answer 24

Are you still going to finish checking my paper?

Answer 25

Yes.

Answer 26

The last word in the 3rd paragraph "activites" is spelled wrong.

Answer 27

The first paragraph you wrote "its female members needs with the equal chance "

It should be written as "female member's" you know how to use apostrophe in plurals. Right?

Answer 28

You did the mistake again, and this time with "a male members"

Answer 29

i think that's about it.

Answer 30

Thanks, so much

Answer 31

Your Welcome :)

Answer 32

OOh, forgot to ask when you said It should be written as "female member's", should I delete the word "its" before "female member's"?

Answer 33

It would work great either with it or without it.

Answer 34

oh, ok thanks again