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Peter Skrzynecki and Avalon Maloney both maybe from diverse worlds however they are familiar with a sense of being an outcast. Skrzynecki emphasizes in poem “St Patrick College” about his life in school where he choose isolation as his companion and the experience he had did nothing to his identity. In poem he portrays the reason not able to blend due to the fact that he was an immigrant similar situation happens with Avalon in modern world where she is not even a foreigner but still she is considered as an interloper because of being a threat to other people social or love life.
Hence both were bullied Skrzynecki in traditional way and Avalon was cyber bullied, Avalon had a advantage of having an outcast friends where Skrzynecki only had his shadow but Avalon still could not relate to her friends . From both text a person can conclude that both characters strive to fit in but they could not pursuit due to different reason of their own.

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plz edit this for me !!
Peter Skrzynecki and Avalon Maloney both maybe from diverse worlds however they are familiar with a sense of being an outcast. Skrzynecki emphasizes in poem “St Patrick College” about his life in school where he choose isolation as his companion and the experience he had did nothing to his identity. In poem he portrays the reason not able to blend due to the fact that he was an immigrant similar situation happens with Avalon in modern world where she is not even a foreigner but still she is considered as an interloper because of being a threat to other people social or love life.            
Hence both were bullied Skrzynecki in traditional way and Avalon was cyber bullied, Avalon had a advantage of having an outcast friends where Skrzynecki only had his shadow but Avalon still could not relate to her friends . From both text a person can conclude that both characters strive to fit in but they could not pursuit due to different reason of their own.