Question

Can someone please check my grammar and proper vocabulary usage? (I have to use fabricate, horde, and slapdash.)

1. The judge sentenced the culprit nine months in prison because the fabricated alibi she provided to the jury lacked proof.

2. A horde of tourists were attracted to Hershey Park’s new roller coaster, Skyrush.
(How can I enhance this sentence even more?)

3. The student made a slapdash project because he procrastinated and was awake until midnight trying to finish it.

Answer 1

Try This 1.) The Judge Sentenced The Murderer 2 Life Terms In Jail Without Bail But Little Did He Know The Judge Fabricated His Sentence Execution For Payback Of His Daughters Death.
2.) A Horde Of Tourists Rushed Knocking Over Several Individuals To The Jaws Premiere And Little Did They Know That The Movie Was Sold Out.
And 3 Is Correct I Just Made The Sentences More Enticing To The Reader

Answer 2

Thank you very much!