Question

I have to do an expository essay. I haven't done one since middle school so I kinda forgot how to do it. I need help with the thesis statement.

Everyone has a possession that he/she cherishes.
Directions: Think about an object that is your prized possession and why it has special meaning to you. Write to explain why the object is your prized possession.

My object is a Hebrew song from my old school.

Answer 1

@ajprincess

Answer 2

I have cherished a Hebrew song from my old school, and it is my most prized possession becuase... (insert your biggest reason why it is your prized possession).

Answer 3

Hi An12345,
If I may, I'd like to point out that the directions say "An object". Although I understand the song is special to you, it may not be what your teacher/professor is looking for. Be mindful to follow the criteria for the essay as some teachers expect directions to be followed perfectly.

Answer 4

^ It's fine with my teacher.

Answer 5

charhasthe411 as much as I appreciate the help, the write way to write a thesis statement is to put all your reasons in it, not the biggest reason.