While Ryan went down the stairs and to the right, Andrew went up the stairs.

What makes the previous sentence unbalanced?

It describes two things for Andrew and only one for Ryan.

It describes two things for Ryan and only one for Andrew.

It should be broken up into two or three smaller sentences.

It uses a comma in the wrong place and is too descriptive.

Question

While Ryan went down the stairs and to the right, Andrew went up the stairs. 

What makes the previous sentence unbalanced?

 It describes two things for Andrew and only one for Ryan.

 It describes two things for Ryan and only one for Andrew.

 It should be broken up into two or three smaller sentences.

 It uses a comma in the wrong place and is too descriptive.

anonymous · Answer

I put D but idk...

anonymous · Answer

I'm pretty sure the comma is in the right place, so I don't think it's D. I think it's either B or C.

anonymous · Answer

thanks for narrowing it down for me!

anonymous · Answer

You're welcome.