Need help with adjectives and word choice on this sentence:

But the things that truly matter in life, the things that we will hold true for the rest of our lives, can be learned from the experiences and lessons we go through as fraternity men. These

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Need help with adjectives and word choice on this sentence:

But the things that truly matter in life, the things that we will hold true for the rest of our lives, can be learned from the experiences and lessons we go through as fraternity men. These

anonymous · Answer

The word "things" , learned" need better replacements
Also need adjectives for "experiences and lessons"
****Don't mind the word "These***

anonymous · Answer

What truly matters in life, the values that we will hold true for the rest of our lives, can be learned from the adventures we experience as fraternity men.

swag · Answer

Hi, I can see that you are a new member here at OpenStudy so, I would first like to say Welcome to OpenStudy, I would like to point you to the chat pods these chat pods are where you can make new friends and talk to new people just like you, I would also like to emphasize our "NON-CHEATING POLICY" we ask here at OpenStudy that you do NOT post exam/Test questions if you are caught doing this we will notify your current school I would also like to ask you to check out the OpenStudy "Code of Conduct" http://openstudy.com/code-of-conduct Please read this carefully and thoroughly. If you need any help feel free to message me or any other ambassador. Welcome to the OpenStudy Community! Ambassador SWAG