Question

is this a good poem?

Answer 1

One day, I will melt all the gold on earth
And craft a wonderful key with it all
This special tool of incredible worth
Will fit well to unlock your heart and soul
The remote buttons will work like a smile
Like a lawine of sweet and loving words
I will turn the knob with a lot of style
And happy thoughts will fly to you as birds
A simple spin of the sweet golden key
Just like a wonder, magic fun and true
Will cause, for everyone to hear and see
A wave of peace and happiness in you
Let's dream of a universe filled with love
And all may get a key from High Above

Answer 2

So-so

Answer 3

So-so

Answer 4

so thats good?

Answer 5

It's okay. I didn't really see move of a rhyme scheme and it wasn't spaced very well.

It's good for someone who's a novice - but it's not comparable to great work.

Answer 6

ok thx.