Can some please read over my schaffer paragraph?

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math_bender_15 · Answer

My ID tends to take over whenever it comes to food, and it does not matter what type of food I’m eating either. Moreover, my ID takes over with food especially around the holidays. For example, once, during Christmas time, I had eaten almost anything I could find. By the end of the day I had consumed, two slices of pizza, three cups eggnog , one cup of hot chocolate, and not one but, five cookies! I had no idea what gotten into me. I was a walking garbage disposal. Plus, eating all of that food only hurt myself in the long run. I had a stomach ache that was worse than ever, and my mom made me eat only “healthy” foods the next day. When my ID took over it didnt care about what I would feel like after eating all that junk, it only cared about the delicious treats at the time. It was being selfish which showed through my actions. In the end I only got what I deserved.

anonymous · Answer

Is this psychology? Like Freud jargo? The paragraph is fine, however I do not know what you teachers are looking for.