Need fixing of comma splices: - In the past, college was only for the upper class society now it is available to almost anyone who will study and work hard. - In the year 1295, Edward I of England gave the Dutch permission to fish in English waters, later the English regretted this when the Dutch became wealthy as a result of the fishing industry. - Artifacts from long ago have been found in England however this might be the site of Camelot.
Are we allowed to split them into sentences or just one solid sentence?
In the past, college was only for the upper class society; now it is available to almost anyone who will study and work hard.
Artifacts from long ago have been found in England, however, this might be the site of Camelot.
Join our real-time social learning platform and learn together with your friends!