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Answer 1

Tobacco by teens in America

What is Tobacco? What effect has in your body? Why teens have so much influence to go in Tobacco? How can the peer pressure affect? Family can make you to use tobacco?



Tobacco is an agricultural product processed from the leaves of plants in the genus Nicotine, and if the tobacco has nicotine, that makes tobacco addictive. The most common way to use tobacco is by smoking. Teens are in the age when everything is new for them, and their parents have a lot of influence on them. If they start doing something bad, the child growing up with that is going to think it’s okay. However, it’s not, because smoking destroys your lungs and can give you cancer.
There are other teens that smoke, because they have a lot of problems in their family. They smoke, because they think that will make them better. There are other teens that smoke, because they have peer pressure with their friends. For example, when teens move to another school and don’t know anyone, they make new friends that do bad things they have never done. They offer to do things, and the teen may say “No.”, but they experience peer pressure.
Teens are so innocent. They don’t know what effects smoking can have in your body and how it can affect your brain. It can also have an affect in the society, because if you have normal friends that don’t do anything bad, they will be mad at you, because you’re changing and doing bad things that they know that is bad for you. Also, you can make problems with your family, because they want the best for you, and you’re making bad choices. They will be mad at you, because they give you all the things that you ask for and treat you right, but if you start smoking, they will be thinking what they do wrong. There are also families that start smoking with them and tell them that you can take your first cigarette with them, and that is a really bad idea, because you are killing your child. You can smoke tobacco, snuff, or chew tobacco, whichcan give you cancer in the mouth or neck.

Teens smoke, because they have problems or because of their friends, or society, or family, or publicity that don’t show the bad things that using tobacco can do to your body. If you are going to use tobacco, I think that you should think about it, because it has a lot of risk.

Answer 2

Tobacco by teens in America

What is Tobacco? What effect has in your body? Why teens have so much influence to go in Tobacco? How can the peer pressure affect? Family can make you to use tobacco?



Tobacco is an agricultural product processed from the leaves of plants in the genus Nicotine, and if the tobacco has nicotine, that makes tobacco addictive. The most common way to use tobacco is by smoking. Teens are in the age when everything is new for them, and their parents have a lot of influence on them. If they start doing something bad, the child growing up with that is going to think it is okay. However, it’s not, because smoking destroys your lungs and can give you cancer.
There are other teens that smoke, because they have a lot of problems in their family. They smoke, because they think that will make them better. There are other teens that smoke, because they have peer pressure with their friends. For example, when teens move to another school and don’t know anyone, they make new friends that do bad things they have never done. They offer to do things, and the teen may say “No.”, but they experience peer pressure.
Teens are so innocent. They don’t know what effects smoking can have in your body and how it can affect your brain. It can also have an effect in the society, because if you have normal friends that don’t do anything bad, they will be mad at you, because you’re changing and doing bad things that they know that is bad for you. Also, you can make problems with your family, because they want the best for you, and you’re making bad choices. They will be mad at you, because they give you all the things that you ask for and treat you right, but if you start smoking, they will be thinking what they do wrong. There are also families that start smoking with them and tell them that you can take your first cigarette with them, and that is a really bad idea, because you are killing your child. You can smoke tobacco, snuff, or chew tobacco, which can give you cancer in the mouth or neck.
Teens smoke, because they have problems or because of their friends, or society, or family, or publicity that doesn’t show the bad things that using tobacco can do to your body. If you are going to use tobacco, I think that you should think about it, because it has a lot of risk.


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