Question

wrote this for fun in my free-time

Answer 1

He's runnin
So fast, to fast
he keeps on chuggin

no cash, no stash
But he keeps on goin
Cause he thinks in the end it'll come out fine
He has skills but he'll show he can ryhme


He dont know how to show it outloud
But he is the only one that stands out in the croud


When he is picked he doesnt know how to react,
He wants hide in his own place,
Safe,relaxed

But he knows this is a chance, maybe his only one
To prove himself that he could be someone.

He walks up to the stage shakin,
Remembering wat his mom used to bake him

When the spot light hits his face he feels like like he is floatin in space
To close to the sun

He smells his moms bakin, gets lost in a place,
Stops shakin

And proves that he is someone.

Answer 2

Tell me any tips and what you think about it

Answer 3

man, i like this :D

Answer 4

thanks this is my first rap i have written.

Answer 5

i try to sing this

Answer 6

You dont sing raps XD

Answer 7

Besides i usually stick to beatboxing XD but now i am getting into this and creating dubstep

Answer 8

lol xD
I just try to rap :D

Answer 9

XD same here now

Answer 10

yo', who is this someone who you rhyme bout'? is kinda a common person. nice lycs.

Answer 11

Bad .

Answer 12

its great

Answer 13

thanks