Question

please help edit this

Answer 1

January 15, 1945

Dear Kitty,
It was long since i talked to you. I keep misplacing you everywhere. Today, I found you under our “prison” mate Marguerite. There is so much I have to tell you. First and foremost, Margot and I were transferred from Auschwitz II a Women's Camp to Bergen Belsen. We were separated from Mother and Pim again. Margot is really sick. She has no strength in her. Every Minute of everyday, I hold her against me and pray to lord to give her strength. But how? There is no proper food. There are No food. On the other hand, I feel really sick too. One day, I was called to meet Hannah, my friend. She had given me some food over the barbed wire. And also some socks for Margot. Life is a living hell here. I wish I can meet Pim just once, just once. I want to leave this stink right now. But what can I do. There is no option just to die out. Oh yes that reminds me, I learned that Margot is suffering from Typhus, Typhus is a disease that people acquire by coming in contact with infected insects like lice, and more

Answer 2

@Falco276 @Taz_kapadia @thomaster

Answer 3

Dear Kitty,
It was long since I talked to you. I keep misplacing you everywhere. Today I found you under our “prison” mate Marguerite. There is so much I have to tell you. First and foremost, Margot and I were transferred from Auschwitz II, a Women's Camp, to Bergen Belsen. We were separated from Mother and Pim again. Margot is really sick, she has no strength in her. Every minute of everyday, I hold her against me and pray to lord to give her strength. But how? There is no proper food. Infact, there is no food. On the other hand, I feel really sick too. One day, I was called to meet Hannah, my friend. She had given me some food over the barbed wire as well as some socks for Margot. Life is a living hell here. I wish I can meet Pim just once, just once. I want to leave this stink right now, but what can I do? There is no option just to die out. Oh yes that reminds me, I learned that Margot is suffering from Typhus, Typhus is a disease that people acquire by coming in contact with infected insects like lice, and more.

Answer 4

isnt that what i have Ashley :)

Answer 5

...I revised it... what do you want?

Answer 6

sorry it kinda sounds like what i had :)

Answer 7

Well the only thing i did was revised to for proper grammar.... did you want it rewritten?

Answer 8

ya sure if u want im not a good writer as u clearly can see

Answer 9

its actually not that bad you just have to fix the gramatical errors which is what @Ashleyisakitty did and it's perfect. lol :)

Answer 10

^^^

Answer 11

okay if u say so