Is this a good thesis statement for my topic.. someone please tell me /:
Topic: My future goals
Thesis:Goals are essential to achievement, in order to achieve the goals in my life I must work hard at whatever I do to be the successful woman I want to be in the future.

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Is this a good thesis statement for my topic.. someone please tell me /:
Topic: My future goals
Thesis:Goals are essential to achievement, in order to achieve the goals in my life I must work hard at whatever I do to be the successful woman I want to be in the future.

anonymous · Answer

Your topic says: My future goals, but you kind of have the importance of your life goals, no your future goals. There is something not in line above, 
I was not judging, that's just a suggestion of changing either your thesis statement or your Topic.