Can someone please help me finish this limerick poem or check over it and tell me what i'm doing wrong (: I would really appreciate it
i'm not sure if this is supposed to go into the writing section but I need to make a roast or toast limerick poem and it's really hard for me because i'm not sure if i'm doing it right i'll post what I have so far "What can I say about my mother.. She huffs and puffs and say lots of stuff." I need five lines and it's tough cause i'm not sure where i'm even going with this
do you still need help on this?
I answered this in the English section...let me know if you still need help!
I don't do form poetry a lot, but to help get you going, why not try expanding on the "lots of stuff" she says? Or expand on the first line, why doesn't the narrator know what to say about his/her mother? Maybe the mother speaks too much, and the narrator doesn't know where to start, or the mother says so many nonsensical things, the narrator doesn't think they are worth repeating (or doesn't pay attention to what she says, like most kids, hehe). Hope this helps.
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