Question

The Industrial Revolution, also known as one of the most important times in history, had both positive and negative effects on society and the economy. However, while the Industrial Revolution had both positive and negative effects on society and the economy, the positive effects outweighed the negative.

Answer 1

The First Industrial Revolution began in England. This was for many reasons. First, England possessed rich deposits of iron and coal, resources essential to industrialization. Second, England had many reliable sources of water power. Third, numerous colonies around the world supplied England's abundant raw materials, like cotton. At the same time, those numerous colonies also provided an enormous captive market for her manufactured goods, like cloth. These colonial markets helped to stimulate the British textile and iron industries, and in the beginning, it was the wealth produced by these two industries that drove the Industrial Revolution. During the mid-18th century, the growing demand for goods, such as the iron hand tools seen here, resulted in greater competition among manufacturers. And as costs of production rose, manufacturers sought new ways of meeting the increased demand for their produces without raising prices.

Answer 2

Due to the Industrial Revolution, there was an increase in production. This made factories want to make more things, and in less time! Did the factories reach this goal? Yes! They did!

*The Industrial Revolution also made new jobs for people!

Answer 3

Thanks to the Industrial Revolution, many inventions were brought out to the world. This not only helped with the increase of demands to make more things for different places in the world, but it also led to an increase in technology!

*Thanks to the Industrial Revolution, there was also an increase in population!

Answer 4

Because of the Industrial Revolution, many were working in factories. The long hours and low wages of factory workers led to a highly significant social result: the development of the labor union movement!

Answer 5

these are positive affects of the industrial revolution :)

Answer 6

Due to the Industrial Revolution, there was an increase of pollution. This was mainly due to the factories. This pollution went into Earth's atmosphere, and it's water. This made things very hard for some people, espicially for the young ones at that time.

Answer 7

Because of the Industrial Revolution, many women and children were working at factories. This was very dangerous, espicially for the children, as they had to work for long hours and had to preform hard jobs at the factory.

Answer 8

these are the negative affects :) can someone please check my work? is everything correct, and is the writing written in third person view? :)

Answer 9

lol almost forgot the conclusion XD here it is: While the Industrial Revolution had both positive and negative effects on society and the economy, the positive effects outweighed the negative. Even though the Industrial Revolution caused some pollution and caused hardship for some of the people working in the factory, it still caused an increase in population, technology, new jobs, and much more!

Answer 10

Why can't you put them up all together so i can check em all at once without scrolling XD

Answer 11

@zale I wish I could D: but I dont think everything will fit T_T

Answer 12

that's fine

Answer 13

How long should ur essay be?

Answer 14

@zale lol I made this on a project type of thing, but other than that, it should be 5 or more :D does everything look good? :)

Answer 15

It looks good. So u want me to give you ideas for ur essay or correct the grammar?

Answer 16

for more ideas:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Industrial_Revolution
http://www.history.com/topics/industrial-revolution
http://www.yale.edu/ynhti/curriculum/units/1981/2/81.02.06.x.html

Answer 17

Did u mention the Machine tools that were used in the industrial revolution?

Answer 18

The Industrial Revolution created a demand for metal parts used in machinery.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Industrial_Revolution

Answer 19

You said "Thanks to the Industrial Revolution, many invention"
what kinds of inventions?
I'm actually making it too detailed for you

Answer 20

@Zale101 thanks for the reminder! :O did I get the spelling right? :)

Answer 21

let me double check that

Answer 22

@Zale101 u r a big help :)

Answer 23

The spelling looks correct to me but there's only one sentence that i found it fragment XD

Answer 24

which one? :O

Answer 25

Aww thank you char, ur a great asker that WANTS TO LEARN!

Answer 26

this sentence "Third, numerous colonies around the world supplied England's abundant raw materials, like cotton"

Answer 27

@Zale101 haha XD no, thank u ^-^ and u my friend are a great helper that WANTS TO HELP! :D

Answer 28

LOL

Answer 29

@Zale101 XD

Answer 30

@Zale101 whats wrong with the sentence? :O lol I must write too fast to even know what I'm writing sometimes >.> then again, thats what u get for having a coconut for a brain -.-

Answer 31

right now, i'm trying to fix it for you to best fits in the paragraph.

Answer 32

The problem with that sentence is that you used to word third to describe the sequences, i think using the word "third" is what made the sentence fragment.
So...Instead, do
"Last, numerous colonies around the world supplied England's abundant raw materials, like cotton."

Answer 33

@Zale101 okay :D thank u! :D

Answer 34

@Zale101 so do I have to do anything else I have to add other than the inventions and change the sentence? :)

Answer 35

i think everything looks good, but be careful next time, when you write something give more details to get more pages XD lol

Answer 36

@Zale101 I sure will! :D thanks zale! *hugs* ^O^

Answer 37

*hugs back*
Good Luck!

Answer 38

@Zale101 bahahaha thanks again XD

Answer 39

wish u could give out more than one medal on here XD