Question

heres a poam i wrote i would like to get peoples in put on it

Love Hate Care Dispare
What is true love anyway
Broken hearts unforgiveable throughts
Tears drown and little she knew
She hated i cared
She was my world
What was i to her
Was there some unknown truth
Was there something said but forgotten
No one knows but i what this death has brought

Answer 1

Wow, I really like this, you have nice words and a good rhythm. But when you post to more people than yourself, you need to proofread. You'd be amazed, not only does proofreading make your work appear nicer for any audience you decide to show it to, but you might also find that you've caught mishaps that actually affect your meaning, or that there is something better you could instead of what you did. So it's a good thing to do even if you don't have an audience as you learn things about your writing style and discover things you could do even better than before.