Making a poem , PLEASE HELP.

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anonymous · Answer

White Puffy clouds 
Big bushy trees 
and Buzzin bee's 
A life of the american teen

We all want what we see,
but we cant have everything we see.
the big drem
The American teenage dream


Thats all i have , can someone revise it or add to it pleaseee.

anonymous · Answer

Live life to the fullest or die as a teen? (lol is that bad x_x)

anonymous · Answer

noooo that kinda helps , does this sound goood.?? 

White Puffy clouds 
Big bushy trees 
and Buzzin bee's 
A life of the american teen

We all want what we see,
but we cant have everything we see.
the big drem
The American teenage dream

We all do crazy things, 
maybe more than others, 
we live and we learn
but the most important thing
Live life to the fullest or die as a teen

anonymous · Answer

maybe more than what others see,
yet, we live and we learn.
but the most important thing is. . .
Live life to the fullest or die as a teen.

(how long does this have to be) Do you like the revision? O:

anonymous · Answer

oh wait yeah thats better , thank you (: and it has to be from four lines to one page.

anonymous · Answer

You're welcome! Get an A :D lol