Question

Medals to best answer

Answer 1

Review the following passage and determine what should be done in its revision.

Roller coasters by Mike Vacation

Small roller coasters should be banned. They are not anywhere near as fun as tall roller coasters, and I can't see any reason to keep them in theme parks at all. Hordes of excited people rush to the park to experience a brand-new ride, and if it turns out to be a tiny roller coaster with no loops or drops, they are disappointed.

My favorite rides are the tallest ones. Anyone who disagrees must be crazy.

I wish all rides were fast, tall, and exciting. In short, big roller coasters are amazing!

This student should work most on grammar, spelling, and organization.

The student should work most on having a main idea with logical transitions.

This student should work most on sentence structure and general clarity.

This student should work most on developing a stronger argument for this topic.

Answer 2

@danielcox74 @Ell @divagirl421

Answer 3

What do you think?

Answer 4

Because his grammar seems completely fine to me. So, eliminate A.

Answer 5

C?

Answer 6

because it is not clear mostly saying and or it does not sense?

Answer 7

Yep, C. Definitely no structure whatsoever. It's broken and not clear.