Question

PLEASE HELP IM Stuck

Essay: Writing a Paragraph

This project takes you through the writing process. You will write a first draft of a paragraph and then will go through a revision process. Make sure that you pay careful attention to instructions.

This project takes you through four stages of composition and revision. In the second part you will copy and paste the paragraph from the first draft and then make needed changes on the new copy. The goal is for you and your teacher to be able to trace the stages of composition and revision of your paragraph.
Instructions

Write a paragraph of 150 to 200 words using your subtopic ideas

Answer the questions below concerning the first draft of your paragraph.

What is the topic sentence?
What is the subject of the topic sentence?
What is the controlling idea of the topic sentence?
Which sentences in the paragraph do not support or prove the controlling idea?

Answer 1

@FriedRice

Answer 2

or give at least idea what to right about

Answer 3

so you need help picking a topic......

Answer 4

i don't know what my teacher wants but he said read instructions :(

Answer 5

Write a paragraph of 150 to 200 words using your subtopic ideas

Answer the questions below concerning the first draft of your paragraph.

What is the topic sentence?
What is the subject of the topic sentence?
What is the controlling idea of the topic sentence?
Which sentences in the paragraph do not support or prove the controlling idea?

thats all they are really asking for no topic was given

Answer 6

can you help me with it ppplleeeasee! s:

Answer 7

http://art-bin.com/art/omodest.html use this as a topic :DD

Answer 8

will it count palagrazim because my teacher doesn't like when i do from web

Answer 9

@highschoolmom2010

Answer 10

no i meant read and summarize it and pf course site the sources you used

Answer 11

@highschoolmom2010 Can you give me Start because im bad at it :( English is my second language

Answer 12

ok first read the passage ^^ and tell me what you are thinking its about

Answer 13

Topic was talked about great world traveling country.I don't know who saw but on streets, on roads and cabins were croweded with poor womens and their kids.they were asking each passeger for something.This women/mothers used all their time for begging for food or money for their kids. they don't work they spend all their time strolling.Author in writing said Who will grow those kids thieves or make them leave native country and fight fir Pretender in Spain or sell themselves to the Barbadoes.

Answer 14

@highschoolmom2010 i wrote what i can from first paragraph of story/topic i don't know

Answer 15

ok in a nutshell the passage talks about eating babies to save the from poverty and over population

Answer 16

i think im bad thats worth for D :( no make sense read

Answer 17

i only did first paragraph

Answer 18

can you give your version or fix what i said pplleease!!! :s

Answer 19

Hey,what topic do you have to write about?

Answer 20

http://art-bin.com/art/omodest.html from here

Answer 21

@uri

Answer 22

no one is going to write an essay for you... Sorry bud but you're on your own :(