Question

Wishing on a broken dream

Answer 1

I love you like the waves love the shore
I love you to day and forever more
to me you are the air when I can not breathe
you have become all I need
you taught me what it's like,
wishing on a broken dream
you've also showed me
that everything's not what it seems
I know you love me but not the same
just let you know my heart is not a game
but a fragile place
where your love has become my saving grace
I'm wishing on a broken dream
please make things what they seem.

Answer 2

it's not completed but close please let me know whatcha think thanks y'all

Answer 3

Wow. I honestly really like it. Good job.

Answer 4

Thank you!! means ALOT @blue_cheetah

Answer 5

@MAYSTEPH @lols4life @betterwiththelightsoff99 @RANE @shkrina @austinL

Answer 6

omg

Answer 7

Its great. I love it. <3 :)

Answer 8

its s nice and heart touching. well done @Ryleighblue , keep it up

Answer 9

Thanks guys :) means a lot

Answer 10

@Im_not_Green

Answer 11

Thumbs up from Austin. He approves.

Answer 12

its so sweat and nice bt sad

Answer 13

I know it kinda explain something i recently went through, i'm still writing it though @RANE

Answer 14

Do you write poems alot? @Ryleighblue

Answer 15

oh! thats bad, is everything ok i mean anything that i can help u out with? would love to

Answer 16

Yes, i just don't expose them a lot

Answer 17

oh... i love write poems and reading...

Answer 18

*writing

Answer 19

Eh things are emotional are you good with relationship advice? @RANE

Answer 20

yeah

Answer 21

w8 a min i know whts the prob

Answer 22

what

Answer 23

pm

Answer 24

am i right ?

Answer 25

no.

Answer 26

honey im right

Answer 27

;( yea..

Answer 28

@khurramshahzad

Answer 29

this is really annoying

Answer 30

he's mssging me for help bt i cant reply to him becoz i have blocked mssgs from everyone in his setting

Answer 31

what is? :(

Answer 32

@dmezzullo @Angels @Compassionate Opinions?

Answer 33

It's pretty good.

Answer 34

thaaaaaanks :)

Answer 35

OMG, WONDERFUL, HEART TOUCHING POEM U SHOULD BECOME A POETIST (I forgot the word so don't judge me) BUT LOVED!!!! :) GOOD LUCK WITH UR POEM WRITING SKILLS!!!

Answer 36

Take my medal -_-