can some one plz edit this paragraph for me plz
My semester one result (year 12) was not what I was expecting due to lack of time I had for preparation which was less than 4 weeks and the assessments that I was unable to complete due to my absent, their results were given as an average mark.

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can some one plz edit this paragraph for me plz 
My semester one result (year 12) was not what I was expecting due to lack of time I had for preparation which was less than 4 weeks and the assessments that I was unable to complete due to my absent, their results were given as an average mark.

mary.rojas · Answer

the first line is confusing

mary.rojas · Answer

you need commas

anonymous · Answer

can u plz copy paste the paragraph and edit it

mary.rojas · Answer

you expect someone to say a paragraph without stopping for air lol?

anonymous · Answer

@mary.rojas wat?

mary.rojas · Answer

lol commas allow a person to pause to catch air lol. that paragraph just goes on and on

anonymous · Answer

The result of the first semester of my senior year was not what I was expecting. I had little time to prepare, a mere four weeks, and my absences prevented me from completing assessments on time. Because of these factors, I received an average mark.

Aaaaaaand that looks better. Anyone want to edit this piece to make it better they can.

anonymous · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

You're welcome.