Question

Essay: Using Details in Writing

Just as details--stories, quotations, names, dates, incidents--make reading more interesting, so the use of details in your writing will make your writing better.
Instructions

Use one of the following topic sentences to write a well-developed paragraph of approximately 150 words. Supply the specific details or examples that support the topic sentence you choose.


. Our dog is a nuisance to the neighbors.
.Baby-sitting is an easy way to earn money.
.My younger sister or brother has an easier life than I did.
. Taxation in America today is confiscatory.
.A guaranteed annual wage would destroy this country.
.Many wild plants are edible.
. The metric system should, or should not, be imposed on Americans.
.Inflation steals from older people who have saved money all their lives.

Answer 1

i dont know how to start

Answer 2

@Jamierox4ev3r

Answer 3

@Jessika.

Answer 4

Okay so do you want any of the topics in particular?

Answer 5

all things in question do you know how to do this?

Answer 6

English is my second language so im bad on it if you can you do 150 words

Answer 7

Yes, basically you need to choose one of the topics and write a 150 word paragraph about it.

Answer 8

i don't have any ideas

Answer 9

which topic can u relate to the most? it may be helpful to relate to something like that

Answer 10

i don't care witch topic i just need 150 words

Answer 11

Okay so I would choose the first topic:

Our dog is a nuisance to the neighbors.

Because it looks like it's the simplest.


Nuisance means bothersome and annoying.

So you can write 150 words on how the dog is annoying to the neighbors.

Answer 12

i have no ideia how dog anooy neighbors lol (when some one passes by near gate she always woofs on every one i don't know what to think of 150 words about how dog annoy people)

Answer 13

i'm not lazy or something like that i love to work but this made me stop :/

Answer 14

can you do it i would thank you 1000 times

Answer 15

My neighbors have been complaining the last couple of weeks due to my dogs barking. They've called, knocked on my door, and even have threatened to call the police if I don't do something about the dog. I am clueless to know why my dog is barking so much! I have checked if he had food or if he was missing something and nothing is wrong, he's just being terribly annoying.

Answer 16

I gave you 71 words check if you can finish

Answer 17

may be dogs want go out not sit on chain or may be she/he has babies

Answer 18

dog*

Answer 19

The next morning I was awakened by the barking of my dog​​. I said to myself, something I have to create one or the police will come cause of mad neighbors.I got dressed and went to see my dog,I untied her and watched what is going to do.Right after i untied her she ran off and i didn't see her that day anymore.Next morning i heard her bark again I said my self she came back.So i quickly dressed up and came out.I saw five puppies i said myself that's why she was barking all those day's she was worry for her pups.

Answer 20

@Jamierox4ev3r i tryed my best to write next part what jess wrote can you combine them if something wrong i wrote correct me thnx

Answer 21

nope this seems like a great idea! also, combine this with Jess's section and you should be good to go.

Answer 22

i know it might be make no scenes XD lol but i couldn't any thing more

Answer 23

just fix a few grammar things lol

Answer 24

My neighbors have been complaining the last couple of weeks due to my dogs barking. They've called, knocked on my door, and even have threatened to call the police if I don't do something about the dog. I am clueless to know why my dog is barking so much! I have checked if he had food or if he was missing something and nothing is wrong, he's just being terribly annoying.The next morning I was awakened by the barking of my dog​​. I said to myself, something I have to create one or the police will come cause of mad neighbors.I got dressed and went to see my dog,I untied her and watched what is going to do.Right after i untied her she ran off and i didn't see her that day anymore.Next morning i heard her bark again I said my self she came back.So i quickly dressed up and came out.I saw five puppies i said myself that's why she was barking all those day's she was worry for her pups.

Answer 25

could you fix please may be some words make no scene

Answer 26

last time it was good but teacher put me 70% can you fix if you find any misstakes

Answer 27

yes i will just give me some time

Answer 28

ok thank you <3 :* i remember you told if im going to have problems with essays just show them to you before showing to a teacher

Answer 29

the sentence,"I am clueless to know why my dog is barking so much!" should be "I have no idea why my dog always creates such a din!"

Answer 30

can you put whole essay with fixed sentences?

Answer 31

jamie?

Answer 32

yeah sure i will do my best

Answer 33

oks :) :*

Answer 34

My neighbors have been complaining the last couple of weeks due to my dogs barking. They've called, knocked on my door, and even have threatened to call the police if I don't do something about the dog. I have no idea why my dog always insists on creating such a din! I have checked for every possible issue and everything always appears to be fine; there is no reason for her to be terribly annoying. The next morning I was awakened by the barking of my dog​​. I said to myself, I've got to do something before my angry neighbors summon the police officers! I quickly dressed myself and went to see my dog. I untied her and watched her to see what she would do. However, as soon as I untied her she ran off and i didn't see her for the rest of the day. Next morning, I heard her bark again I said my self, again?! So i began the same regimen as yesterday and came out to see what the fuss was all about. To my surprise, I saw five puppies i said myself that's why she was barking all those day's she was worry for her pups.

Answer 35

eyeye <3 :*

Answer 36

i love you thank you so much

Answer 37

you can read second part jess lol
combined with urs

Answer 38

Together we are smarticles.

Answer 39

202 words