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OpenStudy (anonymous):

Write an essay my hobby not long to short

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@hobbs978 hey could you help?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@Jamierox4ev3r help me

OpenStudy (anonymous):

im not writing an essay :/

OpenStudy (anonymous):

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OpenStudy (anonymous):

@e.cociuba

OpenStudy (anonymous):

on a hobby

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@incognlto

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@Incognlto

OpenStudy (anonymous):

My favorite hobby is RC

OpenStudy (anonymous):

All people on Earth have their favorite hobby.Hobby is Favorite occupation which you do with desire.Each person has their own hobby,some people like to skydiving,some people like to travel.My hobby is RC.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i don't know what to continue with RC? any ideas? inco?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

RC=Radio Control

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I have like 3 rc cars one of them is gasoline and 1 plane and 1 helicopter

OpenStudy (anonymous):

it should look like not to big not to small

OpenStudy (lncognlto):

Then you can continue something like this: My favourite hobby is radio-control (lets not use abbreviations). There are many types of radio-control, such as cars, boats, and airplanes. The ones I like most are cars and planes, and I have 3 radio-controlled cars, 1 plane, and 1 helicopter.

OpenStudy (lncognlto):

Now we need about 4 more lines, right?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

(lets not use abbreviations).?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

just correcting that part of the essay to tell you that not everyone knows what a RC is so instead say radio-control

OpenStudy (anonymous):

ok :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

so?

OpenStudy (lncognlto):

Actually, we can split that last line into two: The ones I like most, however, are cars and planes. I have 3 radio-controlled cars, 1 plane, and 1 helicopter, but my favourite car is my Traxxsas/4x4 (this is the correct spelling, btw) one. It is nitro-powered, and it goes up to 60 miles per hour!

OpenStudy (lncognlto):

Now we need a good conclusion, I think.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

did you look up? that car ?

OpenStudy (lncognlto):

Yes, I did, but sorry I just noticed I wrote it wrong: it should be Traxxsas Slash 4x4

OpenStudy (anonymous):

favourite isnt should be favorite?

OpenStudy (lncognlto):

Yes, sorry, favourite is the way of spelling it in my country, but in this case it must be favorite.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

your in UK?

OpenStudy (lncognlto):

South Africa, but our spelling is the same as the UK :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

All people on Earth have their favorite hobby.Hobby is Favorite occupation which you do with desire.Each person has their own hobby,some people like to skydiving,some people like to travel.My Favorite hobby is radio-control. There are many types of radio-control, such as cars, boats, and airplanes.The ones I like most, however, are cars and planes. I have three radio-controlled cars, one plane, and one helicopter, one of my favorite car is my Traxxsas slash 4x4 Its is nitro-powered, and it goes up to 60 miles per hour!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

re-read for grammar and meaning see if its looks good

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i think however is not match their what you think?

OpenStudy (lncognlto):

All people on Earth have their favorite hobby. A hobby is a favorite occupation which you do with desire.Each person has their own hobby. Some people like to skydive, while some people like to travel. My favorite hobby is radio-control. There are many types of radio-control, such as cars, boats, and airplanes.The ones I like most are cars and planes. I have three radio-controlled cars, one plane, and one helicopter, one of my favorite car is my Traxxsas slash 4x4 Its is nitro-powered, and it goes up to 60 miles per hour!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

how you say 60miles in km ?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

140 km?

OpenStudy (lncognlto):

No, apparently about 97 km/h, which is kind of fast around here.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

so its 100 mph

OpenStudy (anonymous):

100kmh

OpenStudy (lncognlto):

Yep, :)

OpenStudy (lncognlto):

Does the end sound fine to you?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

good that fine

OpenStudy (lncognlto):

Cool cool :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

thank you very much African friend :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I'm Russian btw :)

OpenStudy (lncognlto):

:) No problem... I have always wanted to see snow, but I have never been able to here :(

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i have african freinds in russia here they speak russian :)

OpenStudy (lncognlto):

Ek kan nie Russian praat nie, maar ek kan Afrikaans praat :) (I cant speak Russian, but I can speak Afrikaans)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

any way have nice day :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i just said your nation live in russia too :)

OpenStudy (lncognlto):

You have nice day too :)

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