Question

write essay any topic 200-800 words

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Just pick one

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need your smarticles jess

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Pick a topic!!!!!!!!

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@love_jessika15 My worst vacation,Morning madness,Alone on a desert island,How it would feel to walk in space, http://thewritesource.com/books/handbooks/school_to_work/ so many topics can't pick one

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How do you think it should start?

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anything that you like

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Want write my worst vacation ?

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@love_jessika15

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or Alone on a desert island

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if I was alone on a desert island

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@e.cociuba

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isthat killing you? e.coc?

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Ok, so let's start on a hobby you absolutely love. Can you tell me what that is?

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i allready wrote about hobby

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Ok, so what do you want to write about? Something that interests you. Give me a general idea.

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Essay:If i was on desert island

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So your essay needs to tell a story of what would happen if you where on a deserted island, correct?

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yeah lets say e.cociuba had ship crashed and you endup on desert island alone what would you do to survive

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like Robinson Crusoe by Daniel Defoe

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if know that story he spend 28 years on desert island

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200-400 words you can start i try to continue :P

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Okay so here's a sentence that you can start with: "The roughness of the sea crashed against my boat, moaning in sign of destruction. I felt my body being thrown across the deck and roughly being dragged, hitting the wood. Sharp pains ran all over my back screaming in hunger at tearing me apart. Then suddenly.... black. Did I die? Where was I? A panicking feeling overtook me as I clawed my way in search of air. That's it, I was going to die. In my last attempts for air, I filled my body with a burst of energy and grabbed on to anything that was in my path. My fingers silently brushed against a sharp ragged rock, tearing my flesh in the process. I clung on for life, knowing that this was my only chance. After a second of rest, I ripped my way to shore, hoping for a second chance to kiss the earth of Gods creation. My body moved in an amazing rhythm also in search of life, shore, and oxygen that was much needed. A sudden peacefulness hit my body, and a beautiful lit shone just a few feet ahead of me. A burst of energy hit my body and up to shore I made it. Kissing the sand with all the strength I had left, I laid there wondering where I was, but also thankful that I got a second chance at life.

Okay, so now here's your part. Start describing what you see, what you eat, where you live, etc.

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So does that help at all? It took me about 20 minutes to write lol

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looks like poem :) if it splited to lines

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And that's a bad thing? Are you going to add to it or not?

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That was 228 words honey. Maybe you can just use that and say for the Title "Survival".

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So how i start other part:it was dark after thew hours laying on sand sun woke me up......(

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i tryed to stand up but my back hurt hard

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so it will make scenes to first part how i start second

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Try this "I attempted to stand on my feet wondering silently if I was still capable. A sharp pain hit my back and down I fell feeling defeated yet again. The hot sun rays hit my flesh with an intensity that made me want to surrender back to the coolness of the sea.

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Just play around with it and see where it goes.

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ofc :)

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So do you need anymore help or can you take it from here?

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can you check after when im done wrting survival part?

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Yea sure. Post it on here an I will try to correct it :) Almost done?

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ok Let creation begin i love work on essay when someone helps

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I attempted to stand on my feet wondering silently if I was still capable. A sharp pain hit my back and down I fell feeling defeated yet again. The hot sun rays hit my flesh with an intensity that made me want to surrender back to the coolness of the sea.I finally stand up and tried look around.I saw big long beach and front of me jangle.I tried look for shade to rest for a bit after cash.After resting I went explore beach in hope finding fragments of ship and stuff that maybe washed on beach after ship crashed.I found wooden planks and bunch other stuff.I found small backpack and first aid box and went back where i was resting.I opened backpack and found their knife,rope,lighter and other things.I was so happy that i found needed stuff.I found big stick and tied up knife on edge and tried to fish.It was getting dark i took some parts of ship and made little shelter and fire.Next morning I made bow from rope i had and thew arrows and went to jangle explore at the end of day I came back I had five birds that i shot while i was exploring jangle i cooked them and ate them.Next Morning i planned to make big sign Help/sos.(After living 12 days on desert island i saw ship in sea i light up big fire from parts ship.The ship saw big fire and sent to me boat with 3 people when they came they took me on board.

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i tried my best e.coc see if you can add something or change to make sense

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jess red first part then second and fix my part to make sense to first part

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read*

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need your smarticles

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I attempted to stand on my feet wondering silently if I was still capable. A sharp pain hit my back and down I fell feeling defeated, yet again. The hot sun rays hit my flesh with an intensity that made me want to surrender back to the coolness of the sea. I finally stood up and tried look around. I saw a big, long beach and in front of me, a jungle. I tried looking for shade to rest for a bit after the crash. After resting, I went to explore the beach in hope of finding fragments of the ship and stuff that may have washed on beach after the ship crashed. I found some wooden planks and bunch other stuff. I found a small backpack and a first aid kit and went back to where i was resting. I opened the backpack and found that there was a knife, rope, lighter, and other things. I was so happy that i found the stuff that I needed. I found a big stick with a tied up knife on end of it and I tried to fish. It was getting dark so, i took some parts of ship and made a little shelter and fire. Next morning, I made a bow from the rope i had and thew arrows and went to jungle to explore. At the end of day I came back I had five birds that i shot while i was exploring the jungle, i cooked them and ate them. Next Morning, i planned to make a big sign saying, "Help/SOS" .After living 12 days on desert island i saw a ship in the sea. I lit up a big fire from parts of the ship. The ship saw big fire and sent to me a boat with 3 people when they came they took me on board.

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I made some corrections

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You did an amazing job

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did e.coc part she helped me with first part what about her smarticles?

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She has some amazing smarticles!

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jees when you wrote about stick i said i found stick and tied up knife

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not just found stick with tied knife already

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" I found a big stick with a tied up knife on end of it and I tried to fish"

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That is correct

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" I found a big stick and tied up a knife to it and I tried to fish" (I mean that I tied a knife on the end of a stick

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Oh
"" I found a big stick and I tied up a knife to the end of it and used it to fish."

That would be the correct phrase then

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do you have any ideas to continue (i feel like i end to early do you know story Robinson Crusoe Book by Daniel Defoe a man lived 28 years on desert island he did a lot things

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jess read this essay it was in My native language but i used translator but it translates not 100% to make sense

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If I got on the desert island.

It seems to me, almost each school student dreams to get on the desert island. It is excellent opportunity to check the strength of mind, ability to cope with unexpected difficulties, to live independently. I would like to appear for a while on the novel earth, one, among the wild nature. It is sure that I could cope with all difficulties and turn this travel on the island into a joyful and unforgettable adventure. If I had an opportunity to collect things on the desert island in advance, I would be prepared properly and packed a big marching backpack. I surely would take with myself matches, a small lamp, warm blankets and a marching rug, a penknife, canned food, a rod, a compass and it is a lot of other subjects with which on the island is much more simply. Still I would take with myself Daniyel Defoe's book "Robinson Crusoe's Adventure": in it it is so in detail and fascinatingly told about life on the desert island. Nevertheless, most likely, I would get on the desert island casually and without necessary things. In books it occurs exactly so. I wouldn't become puzzled and in this case. First of all I would investigate the island and drew the detailed map of this place on a piece of wood bark. On the card I surely would note parts of the world. Examining the island, I would choose a place for a safe lodging for the night, would pay attention to plants and edible fruits, would find a source of fresh water. Then I would build for myself the small dwelling. It would be the tent from logs, sticks and branches. Usually on exotic islands trees with large leaves grow. I would use them instead of a blanket and a pillow. Then I would find for myself suitable food. On the island for certain there would be tasty fruits, berries, nuts. If I managed to make a rod, I would catch fish. In order that me as soon as possible found, I would part a fire. From books I know about campaigns that for a high column of a smoke it is better to use coniferous branches. I would try to do so that my fire never went out. Then the ships floating by would notice me as soon as possible, rescued and brought home. Travel on the desert island not only would give me the sea of bright impressions, but also would teach me to be more independent and adult.

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I'll read it in a minute I have to finish something really quickly

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its someone else essay in my language but google translator makes no sense

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@love_jessika15

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btw its not my essay

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It seems to me, almost each school student dreams to get on a deserted island. It is an excellent opportunity to check the strength of mind, ability to cope with unexpected difficulties, and to live independently. I would like to appear for a while on the novel earth, one, among the wild nature. It is sure that I could cope with all difficulties and turn this travel on the island into a joyful and unforgettable adventure. If I had an opportunity to collect things on the desert island in advance, I would be prepared properly and packed a big backpack. I surely would take with myself matches, a small lamp, warm blankets and a marching rug, a penknife, canned food, a rod, a compass and it is a lot of other subjects with which on the island is much more simply. Still I would take with myself Daniyel Defoe's book "Robinson Crusoe's Adventure*; in it it is so in detail and fascinatingly told about life on the desert island. Nevertheless, most likely, I would get on the desert island casually and without necessary things. In books it occurs exactly so. I wouldn't become puzzled and in this case. First of all I would investigate the island and drew the detailed map of this place on a piece of wood bark. On the card I surely would note parts of the world. Examining the island, I would choose a place for a safe lodging for the night, would pay attention to plants and edible fruits, would find a source of fresh water. Then I would build for myself the small dwelling. It would be the tent from logs, sticks and branches. Usually on exotic islands trees with large leaves grow. I would use them instead of a blanket and a pillow. Then I would find for myself suitable food. On the island for certain there would be tasty fruits, berries, nuts. If I managed to make a rod, I would catch fish. In order that me as soon as possible found, I would part a fire. From books I know about campaigns that for a high column of a smoke it is better to use coniferous branches. I would try to do so that my fire never went out. Then the ships floating by would notice me as soon as possible, rescued and brought home. Travel on the desert island not only would give me the sea of bright impressions, but also would teach me to be more independent and adult.

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I did few corrections

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witch essay is great my creation or this one

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Hmm

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i can post this essay my teacher won't notice it was from Ru web

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I like your great creation better

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540 words 2671 characters

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i used wordcounter.net

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Thats good

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You can also use word to count words

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what would you name it (shipwreck and survival on desert island)

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Survival on Desert Island

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Survival on Desert Island .
The roughness of the sea crashed against my boat, moaning in sign of destruction. I felt my body being thrown across the deck and roughly being dragged, hitting the wood. Sharp pains ran all over my back screaming in hunger at tearing me apart. Then suddenly.... black. Did I die? Where was I? A panicking feeling overtook me as I clawed my way in search of air. That's it, I was going to die. In my last attempts for air, I filled my body with a burst of energy and grabbed on to anything that was in my path. My fingers silently brushed against a sharp ragged rock, tearing my flesh in the process. I clung on for life, knowing that this was my only chance. After a second of rest, I ripped my way to shore, hoping for a second chance to kiss the earth of Gods creation. My body moved in an amazing rhythm also in search of life, shore, and oxygen that was much needed. A sudden peacefulness hit my body, and a beautiful lit shone just a few feet ahead of me. A burst of energy hit my body and up to shore I made it. Kissing the sand with all the strength I had left, I laid there wondering where I was, but also thankful that I got a second chance at life.I attempted to stand on my feet wondering silently if I was still capable. A sharp pain hit my back and down I fell feeling defeated, yet again. The hot sun rays hit my flesh with an intensity that made me want to surrender back to the coolness of the sea. I finally stood up and tried look around. I saw a big, long beach and in front of me, a jungle. I tried looking for shade to rest for a bit after the crash. After resting, I went to explore the beach in hope of finding fragments of the ship and stuff that may have washed on beach after the ship crashed. I found some wooden planks and bunch other stuff. I found a small backpack and a first aid kit and went back to where i was resting. I opened the backpack and found that there was a knife, rope, lighter, and other things. I was so happy that i found the stuff that I needed.I found a big stick and I tied up a knife to the end of it and used it to fish. It was getting dark so, i took some parts of ship and made a little shelter and fire. Next morning, I made a bow from the rope i had and thew arrows and went to jungle to explore. At the end of day I came back I had five birds that i shot while i was exploring the jungle, i cooked them and ate them. Next Morning, i planned to make a big sign saying, "SOS" .After living twelve days on desert island I saw a ship in the sea. I lit up a big fire from parts of the ship. The ship saw big fire and sent to me a boat with three people when they came they took me on board.

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e.coc you can read i finished with help jess :)

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Okiee (:

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(one thing it might be ended to early )

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have you read Robinson Crusoe by Daniel Defoe a man lived 28 year on desert island

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he did alot things

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Okay so here's a correction needed to be made. "A sudden peacefulness hit my body, and a beautiful lit shone just a few feet ahead of me." Lit is supposed to be turned to light.
Like this:
A sudden peacefulness hit my body, and a beautiful light shone just a few feet ahead of me.

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umm can you drop that in text and repaste

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anyways did you like my part?

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Yes, but there are a lot of mistakes made that I found. I want you to look over it again and see if you can correct any of them.

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SO HERE'S THE FINISHED ESSAY:

Survival on the Deserted Island
By: Mr. ClayLordMath
The roughness of the sea crashed against my boat, moaning in sign of destruction. I felt my body being thrown across the deck and roughly being dragged, hitting the wood. Sharp pains ran all over my back screaming in hunger at tearing me apart. Then suddenly.... black. Did I die? Where was I? A panicking feeling overtook me as I clawed my way in search of air. That's it, I was going to die. In my last attempts for air, I filled my body with a burst of energy and grabbed on to anything that was in my path. My fingers silently brushed against a sharp ragged rock, tearing my flesh in the process. I clung on for life, knowing that this was my only chance. After a second of rest, I ripped my way to shore, hoping for a second chance to kiss the earth of God's creation. My body moved in an amazing rhythm also in search of life, shore, and oxygen that was much needed. A sudden peacefulness hit my body, and a beautiful light shone just a few feet ahead of me. A burst of energy hit my body and up to shore I made it. Kissing the sand with all the strength I had left, I laid there wondering where I was, but also thankful that I got a second chance at life. I attempted to stand on my feet wondering silently if I was still capable. A sharp pain hit my back and down I fell feeling defeated, yet again. The hot sun rays hit my flesh with an intensity that made me want to surrender back to the coolness of the sea. I finally stood up and tired effortlessly to look around. I was astonished at the sight before me. The beaches gold sand gleamed in the sunlight heating the souls of my feet. A long beach stretched before me miles and miles long. The jungle ahead me stood still in a darkness filled with mysterious wonder. A tree near by provided me with the rest that I needed. After resting, I went to explore the beach in hope of finding fragments of the ship and items that may have been washed on beach after the storm. I found some wooden planks and many more items that would help me survive on this mysterious land. I found a small backpack and a first aid kit, and went back to where i was resting. I opened the backpack and found that there was a knife, rope, lighter, and many more things. I found a large wooden stick with a tied up knife on end of it and I tried to fish. It was getting dark so, i took some parts of ship and made a little shelter and fire for the night that lay ahead of me. Next morning, I made a bow from the rope i had and two arrows and went into the jungle to explore. At the end of day I came back with five birds that I had shot while I was exploring the jungle. I cooked them for my evening meal and ate them feeling satisfied. Next Morning, I planned to make a big sign saying, "Help/SOS". After living 12 days on deserted island, I saw a ship in the sea. I lit up a big fire from parts of the ship. The ship saw the large cloud of smoke and fire and sent to me a boat with 3 people. When they came they took me on board. The only thing I was thinking was "thank god". It was a day that I would never forget.

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you forgot by Claylord and E.cociuba :)

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with out that wouldnt happen

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Lol well I corrected it as much as I could and added a bit more it there. I hoped that all helped. Took us a while, but when someone needs help, I'm here ;)

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ok

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want read what i found on my language essay

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but used google translator because im bad at translating

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something wont make sense

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It seems to me, almost each school student dreams to get on a deserted island. It is an excellent opportunity to check the strength of mind, ability to cope with unexpected difficulties, and to live independently. I would like to appear for a while on the novel earth, one, among the wild nature. It is sure that I could cope with all difficulties and turn this travel on the island into a joyful and unforgettable adventure. If I had an opportunity to collect things on the desert island in advance, I would be prepared properly and packed a big backpack. I surely would take with myself matches, a small lamp, warm blankets and a marching rug, a penknife, canned food, a rod, a compass and it is a lot of other subjects with which on the island is much more simply. Still I would take with myself Daniyel Defoe's book "Robinson Crusoe's Adventure*; in it it is so in detail and fascinatingly told about life on the desert island. Nevertheless, most likely, I would get on the desert island casually and without necessary things. In books it occurs exactly so. I wouldn't become puzzled and in this case. First of all I would investigate the island and drew the detailed map of this place on a piece of wood bark. On the card I surely would note parts of the world. Examining the island, I would choose a place for a safe lodging for the night, would pay attention to plants and edible fruits, would find a source of fresh water. Then I would build for myself the small dwelling. It would be the tent from logs, sticks and branches. Usually on exotic islands trees with large leaves grow. I would use them instead of a blanket and a pillow. Then I would find for myself suitable food. On the island for certain there would be tasty fruits, berries, nuts. If I managed to make a rod, I would catch fish. In order that me as soon as possible found, I would part a fire. From books I know about campaigns that for a high column of a smoke it is better to use coniferous branches. I would try to do so that my fire never went out. Then the ships floating by would notice me as soon as possible, rescued and brought home. Travel on the desert island not only would give me the sea of bright impressions, but also would teach me to be more independent and adult.

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Didn't we already finish your essay? Now all you have to do is submit it.

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What was that for^?

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just to read :) it was example to me

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Okay, so were done? Did you submit your paper in?

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yeah i sent it to my teacher he will grade i let you know what kinda grade i will get

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he might answer tomorrow

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So you send the one that I corrected, right? The one that's all finished?