Question

Correct me if i made some mistakes please

Answer 1

Write a short story about a main character who undergoes a change or learns something. If you feel your creativity is lacking, remember writing about what you know, your own personally experiences or those of your friends and family are easy to turn into an entertaining short story. Include the following elements in your short story:
A clear setting – the time and place of the story
A plot – series of events that builds to a dramatic climax
A narrator to tell the story
Effective descriptions using sensory details
Dialogue to develop the characters
Error-free grammar, including use of consistent verb tense

Answer 2

"When was the Last time I stopped parting with Friends!"
It all started about 1 year ago in Minneapolis. Usually me and my friends party all day and night every two days for years since we graduated from college. Some of the people i party with are in gangs. One day we had a party at Sami's house and Sami is a blood. At Sami's house everybody drinks alcohol and like to use drugs. I ran out of smokes so me and my buddy Saeed got money from about twenty people at the party and walked to the store. On the way we ran in to some more people who had money for alcohol. We got to the store and I got some five packs of cigarettes and Saeed got six 12 packs of beer. It was hard to bring all that beer back to the house but we did. When we got back there was over a 100 people inside and outside of the house. Sami gave me and Saeed a pack of smokes and let us split a 12 pack of beer for going to the store for him. Somehow i ran into my friend John. John is a skin head Nazi; he was my best friend even though i was not right. We talked for hours, John had been my best friend for ten year and it has been about one year since i last saw him. But me and Saeed had to go back to the store to get more beer for Sami. Me and Saeed always go to the store together so i don't get robed or jumped. When we got back it was about 1:00am and Sami and his roommate Michele ate 30 Xanax bars and about 10 bars can kill a normal person. Michele is a blood. One time he stabbed his own dad for five dollars and a bag of weed and that is not much to stab someone for. So me and Saeed got the beer back to Michele and Sami and they looked like they haven’t slept for days. A little kid had a gun and he pulled it out to show off. That kid was only 13 year old, how did he get that gun? But later we found out that it was a part of John's gang. After i drank a shot with John and gave him a cigarette a fight broke out. It lasted for 30 minutes and when the fight was over John got in his truck. I was walking up when Michele shuck is right hand and stab him in the left eye with a Philips head screwdrivers. I thought he was dead but he yelled "i can't see i can't see!" So Sami stabbed him too about 20 times in the back and in the back of his head and the little kid with the gun just stud there pointing the gun at every one. My little sister was there to so grave her hand and ran down the street. Time we got to the end of the block cops was everywhere. Today Sami and Saeed are in prison!


And that is a true story
correct me if there is grammer error

Answer 3

You copied 85295James http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/502eecc1e4b0e46adced00ae

You should be a shame of yourself.....