Question

Wrote a song for my love, Christopher.
Need someone's opinion because it's for his birthday.

Once upon a time in a land far away, met a young man I was happy to say,
we were like each other's missing half.
'e said he loved me, I loved him back,
got in a fight, and I took back
everything that I said.
Well this young man, he was so nice
made a li'l lovebird out of ice
he worked magic
just like that.
I'm still in love with that young man
so I'm gonna say s'much as I can
Baby, here
this song is just for you,

Answer 1

When we're together
everything is
how it should be
Just
you and me
you're all I
need.
When I cry, you
wipe my eyes, yeah you
hold me tight
I
wanna fly with you.

Answer 2

Only you.
My darling every time
I see that smile
of yours
I find myself
like a idiot
tryin' to
kiss you.
Flattery works, it makes me blush, yeah
first I'm hooked, then I'm all flushed
baby please
realise
you're
all I need.

Answer 3

When we're together
everything is
how it should be
Just
you and me
you're all I
need.
When I smile, you
smile with me, yeah you
blush easily, baby
I
wanna fly with you.
Only you
ye-ea-ah.

Answer 4

@CarolineStar

Answer 5

I think is pretty good just you need the write tune for it to make it work well other then that nice lyrics

Answer 6

Thanks so much ^^ I hope he likes it

Answer 7

so do i i can see you put alot of emotion in it