no one can save a lonely angel.
a swollen heart full of people.
taking back what once was mine.
and so it is time to cross the line.
that held me back the day I tried.
till I found out that you lied.

Question

no one can save a lonely angel.
a swollen heart full of people.
taking back what once was mine. 
and so it is time to cross the line.
that held me back the day I tried.
till I found out that you lied.

demonickittenlover · Answer

any way I can improve this?

anonymous · Answer

No one can save a lonely angel
A swollen heart full of people always making you cry
But I'm taking back what was once mine
And now I'm crossing the line
The one that held me back the day I tried
Until I found out that you're the one who lied

Not sure if you like it but I love to write so hope you like it, yours was beautiful.