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CAN SOMEONE HELP ME EDIT MY STORY????

Answer 1

what type of editing do you need?

Answer 2

grammar, and to see if it needs fixing

Answer 3

ok i can take a look

Answer 4

A friend that had a great influential impact on my life has to be my friend name Chelsea, I always thought she was the sweetest person ever. Me and her are like peas in a pod. She is very funny, talented, loving, etc. Caring about many of her loved ones, she would often put herself before anyone else. Seeing as though we do not attend the same college, we still remain very close, because a long distance, isn't going to mess destroy our friendship. As teenagers, you'd expect us to be roaming the streets at night, or partying, or doing some other kind of bad deed, but actually me and her could just sit around and watch movies for hours and not get bored. I'm not the party type, and so isn't she, so we would have our own party, with snacks and Netflx. I remember one time she spent the night, and we ordered pizza and watched the movie Ted. It was a really fun night, and we had a blast. Another time we had together is when we went bowling, it was awesome, and we had tons of fun. The food was great too, considering me and her love to eat. I have had a number of great experiences with her, she is my best friend, and will always be someone who has brought good influences in my life.

Answer 5

in the first line take out "name"

Answer 6

after "Chelsea" put a period

Answer 7

change
Me and her are like peas in a pod.
to
She and I are like peas in a pod.

Answer 8

change this
I'm not the party type, and so isn't she,
to this
I'm not the party type, and she isn't either,

Answer 9

change this
The food was great too, considering me and her love to eat.
to this
The food was really delicious, considering me and her love to eat.

Answer 10

That's all :)

Answer 11

thanks!!!

Answer 12

A friend that has had a great influential impact on my life has to be my friend Chelsea. I always thought she was the sweetest person ever. She and i are like peas in a pod. She is very funny, talented, loving, etc. Caring about many of her loved ones, she would often put herself before anyone else. Seeing as though we do not attend the same college, we still remain very close, because a long distance, isn't going to mess destroy our friendship. As teenagers, you'd expect us to be roaming the streets at night, or partying, or doing some other kind of bad deed, but actually me and her could just sit around and watch movies for hours and not get bored. I'm not the party type, and she isn't either, so we would have our own party, with snacks and Netflx. She and i were very much alike, in several ways. We had split personalities, we could even finish each other sentences, that's how close her and i were. She always made me feel happy, even when i was at my lowest, she could make me laugh no matter how serious i was. I remember one time she spent the night, and we ordered pizza and watched the movie Ted. It was a really fun night, and we had a blast. Another time we had together is when we went bowling, it was awesome, and we had tons of fun. The food was delicious, considering me and her love to eat. I have had a number of great experiences with her, she is my best friend, and will always be someone who has brought good influences in my life. I ADDED SOME THING TO THIS CAN YOU RE-READ IT AND EDIT IT FOR ME.
THANKS

Answer 13

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She and i are like peas in a pod.

CHANGE THIS
Seeing as though we do not attend the same college, we still remain very close, because a long distance, isn't going to mess destroy our friendship.
TO THIS
Even though we do not attend the same college, we still remain very close. Long distance, isn't going to mess up or destroy our friendship.

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but actually me and her could just sit around and watch movies for hours and not get bored.
TO THIS
but actually her and I could just sit around and watch movies for hours and not get bored.

CAPITALIZE I
She and i were very much alike,

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that's how close her and i were.

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even when i was at my lowest,

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no matter how serious i was.

THAT'S ALL ^_^