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CAN SOMEONE HELP ME EDIT MY STORY

Answer 1

Sure

Answer 2

A friend that had a great influential impact on my life has to be my friend Chelsea. I always thought she was the sweetest person ever. She and i are like peas in a pod. She is very funny, talented, loving, etc. Caring about many of her loved ones, she would often put herself before anyone else. Seeing as though we do not attend the same college, we still remain very close, because a long distance, isn't going to mess destroy our friendship. As teenagers, you'd expect us to be roaming the streets at night, or partying, or doing some other kind of bad deed, but actually me and her could just sit around and watch movies for hours and not get bored. I'm not the party type, and she isn't either, so we would have our own party, with snacks and Netflx. I remember one time she spent the night, and we ordered pizza and watched the movie Ted. It was a really fun night, and we had a blast. Another time we had together is when we went bowling, it was awesome, and we had tons of fun. The food was delicious, considering me and her love to eat. I have had a number of great experiences with her, she is my best friend, and will always be someone who has brought good influences in my life.

Answer 3

okay, i will check it out

Answer 4

i was writing this for my online homework, and i got feedback from it. it says its a 3 out of 10, i want to now what can make it a 9 or 10 out of 10.

Answer 5

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Answer 6

My friend Chelsea is one of those people that has had a huge impact on my life (Unless you prefer the word influence. I would use one or the other though). I have always thought she is the sweetest person ever. She and I are like peas in a pod. She is very funny, talented, loving, etc. One of her great attributes is caring about, and loving others, and often will put her loved ones wellbeing before her own. Seeing we do not attend the same college, we still remain very close, as a long distance isn't going to destroy our friendship. As teenagers, you'd expect us to be roaming the streets at night, or partying, or doing some other kind of bad deed, but actually she and I could just sit around and watch movies for hours and not get bored. I'm not the party type, and neither is she, so we just like to have our own party, with snacks, and movies on Netflix. I remember this one time she spent the night, and we ordered pizza, and watched the movie Ted. It was our definition of a fun night. Another time I remember is when we went bowling. It was awesome, completely filled with fun. The food was delicious, considering she and I love to eat. I have had so many great experiences with her. She is my best friend, and will always be someone who has been a good influence in my life.

Answer 7

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