Question

can you hear me?
i'm all alone screaming,
trying to let you know that i'm ok...

can you see me,
i'm shivering in pain,
and i'm trying to find my way out.....

can you help me turn my life around,
can you help me get myself back on track....
can you tell me what to do now,
can you help me get my life back.....

Answer 1

aaaw! that's awesome.. =)

Answer 2

it made me sad :( anyways, it's beautiful..

Answer 3

its my life

Answer 4

oh, sorry.. well, i can relate to it! that's why it's awesome..

Answer 5

cool... i am just always depressed so i just thought of this yesterday and i thought i just share it

Answer 6

thanks for sharing it :) hope you'll also share something like that again so i can read it..

Answer 7

pretty good @kimune2

Answer 8

The writing is really good and the rhyming is perfect:) It is always good to share your feelings. I find it easier to disperse into poetry, It makes it more meaningful :)

Answer 9

nice ;)

Answer 10

thank you summer :) nice seeing you again

Answer 11

You too I didn't relize that it was you michael untill I saw your user name and then I waas ohhhh. I had an ohhh moment :3