I want someone to review these lyrics. I wrote this song about how finding my bf saved me from depression and possible suicide. The reason for it was because im gay and my parents and most people don't accept me for who i am.

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anonymous · Answer

Life Saver - by Caylen Fox 

You are my life saver thrown out of nowhere. I would have drowned if not for you and you alone. I was so lonely, floating in the middle of nowhere and you came right out and you pulled me back to shore.


When I was young, I was so stupid. Only trying to think of my self. Then I found out, something you never want to hear. Something nobody talks about. I was gay, I liked men, and suddenly I was all alone. A struggle against man, against society. I just really needed to be set free.

You are my life saver thrown out of nowhere. I would have drowned if not for you and you alone. I was so lonely, floating in the middle of nowhere and you came right out and you pulled me back to shore.

Now I was at 13 thinking of things unseen in my mind, I had to make it and to make it right. So I decided like I had. That I just had to hide it and it would go away just like my life. It caused me sorrow and pain and getting stuck playing that game. I was drinking and smoking and cutting hoping to be set free.

You are my life saver thrown out of nowhere. I would have drowned if not for you and you alone. I was so lonely, floating in the middle of nowhere and you came right out and you pulled me back to shore.

Last week I got on IM and you sent me just one message. It seemed like you were just saying Hi. Long time no speak, and so many complications. I was just talking to you cause I was weak. Little did I know this was the start of something bigger, bigger and helping my recovery. Now you listen to this song and tell me what I mean to you. Because love this pure could never be wrong. Could never be wrong. You know why it can't ever be wrong?

Because you are my life saver thrown out of nowhere. I would have drowned if not for you and you alone. I was so lonely and sad and so, afraid of my dad. But now I know in my heart I am not alone, I'm in love.

*whispers*
"don't forget my love babe, remember that"

anonymous · Answer

this song makes me cry every time i read the chorus, i always write stuff like this when i am getting deeply emotional

anonymous · Answer

One Dutch Two Dutch Queens of the double dutch we skip better that much Watch our feet our moves are sweet Our double dutchin won't be beat Vulgen Swingin fast Fued.

anonymous · Answer

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