Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Ashley wanted a puppy. He talked to his family for hours. They did not believe he had time to care for the puppy. Ashley created a puppy-care plan. His family finally agreed.

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Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Ashley wanted a puppy. He talked to his family for hours. They did not believe he had time to care for the puppy. Ashley created a puppy-care plan. His family finally agreed.

anonymous · Answer

@charlotte123  did you do this question i need help .

charlotte123 · Answer

@Rubio101 I'm working on it now actually XD But I'm trying to get my teacher for help >.>

anonymous · Answer

ohh ok lol im having a really hard time with this one -___-

charlotte123 · Answer

@Rubio101 me too ;-; did u do the dialogue one?

anonymous · Answer

is it a lesson ?

charlotte123 · Answer

@Rubio101 its in the same assignment where this question is coming from ^_^

anonymous · Answer

Well the lesson im doing is 1.11 and is it this question ?

"In dialogue, you should start a new paragraph every time"

charlotte123 · Answer

@Rubio101 this one: Invent dialogue and revise the following paragraph. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Ashley talked to his family for hours about how much he wanted a puppy. It took them forever, but they finally gave in. :)

anonymous · Answer

no... sorry but i have something similar to it.

charlotte123 · Answer

@Rubio101 my bad XD good luck XD