Question

can you help me revise theses emails???? E-mail A: HEY! I NEED THE TRAINING MANUAL 2 READ B4 MY NEXT SHIFT. R U DUN WITH IT? E-mail B: This customer called today and totally yelled at me. She said there was a mistake on her bill, but I totally did not cause the problem. She went on and on about how this was the fourth time there was a mistake on her bill or something like that. Like I care! But she's gonna call again tomorrow. What do you want me to do to get this lady off my back?

Answer 1

Well, you want to make them use proper english. No slang. NOT IN ALL CAPS! IM text is LOL, but AFAIK dey get you fired when used in busines communications. So, what do you think it would be in normal text?

Answer 2

Hello I was wondering if you could please send me the manuals before my next shift tomorrow. Thank you.

Answer 3

Good start! There was an urgency to that one though.

Hello. I was wondering if you could please send me the manuals before my next shift tomorrow. As you know, I need to go through this information before then, so this is very important. Thank you.

Answer 4

ok thanx but im having a really rough time with the second one can u help me with it?

Answer 5

Dixie a leopard gecko?

"This customer called today and totally yelled at me." Totally? Welcome to the valley, but not exactly business like.

"She said there was a mistake on her bill, but I totally did not cause the problem." Very defensive.

"She went on and on about how this was the fourth time there was a mistake on her bill or something like that." So what! It is business.

"Like I care!" Again, wrong attitude in business.

"But she's gonna call again tomorrow." Be more informative less commentary.

"What do you want me to do to get this lady off my back?" Off your back? Or solve the problem!

Imagine you were the customer. How would you want people to be talking about you.

Answer 6

lol no she is a bearded dragon
okie i think i get it i will RE-wright it and copy and paste it here so u can see it

Answer 7

Ah, same spotted back.

Answer 8

yeah lol have u watched the movie holes?

Answer 9

Nope.

Answer 10

oh well i was gonna say the lizards on the movie where bearded dragons but the painted yellow spots on them and animated when they ran on there back legs and when the puffed up there beards

Answer 11

Herps have been making it into more movies lately. Even animated. Rango and Tangeled are examples of that.

Answer 12

yeah lol but they entertain us so....

Answer 13

Hehe. And it is not like you have to be evil to like a lizard... which is what they used to show all the time.

Answer 14

lol yeah but this lizard is nice lol

Answer 15

Most are. Just misunderstood critters.

Answer 16

yeah lol