CAN SOMEONE HELP ME EDIT THIS TO MAKE IT LONGER, AND SOUND BETTER: Education is something that has been a very positive in the world since the world was created. Not only is education important for everyone to achieve, those who could not afford it before, now can get it for free. College is very expensive, and not many could afford it before, so either they don’t go, or they stick with their minimum waged job. Now the government will pay for a kids college funds, and make sure they’ll get the proper education that they deserve. Since education has become free throughout the world, low income

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anonymous · Answer

families will not be left out. Low income families or otherwise will not feel burdened by the high cost of education for their children. Also people with higher education generally leads to higher paying, and better jobs. There is also a self-confidence factor that can come from having a higher education than others. On the contrary, free education can lead to substandard education or educational goals if there is not enough money to the educator.

mandre · Answer

" that has been a very positive in"
That sentence sounds like it's missing a word, e.g. "a very positive influence". That still doesn't sound quite right, but I'm sure you get what I'm saying. There are many people (including myself) without a college degree who does not have a minimum wage job. That might offend some people. You have to either drop that or change it up a bit since you want to increase your word count. "a minimum wage or low income job" is a suggestion.

Is this supposed to be fiction because it looks like it as it has a documentary style but includes blatant untruths, like free education everywhere.