I need to write a 5 paragraph paper on why kids should get allowance. Help me? c:
a) It'll help them later on (and the present time) with budget management b) It helps them shop smarter (finding the cheapest price for the product they want) c) With chores, helps them understand the value of money and how the real world works Those are my points.
The decision to give a child allowance is up to the parents, but there are many benefits to giving a child an allowance. An allowance may seem like an easy way to get money every week, but this is not the case when the child must do things in order to get the allowance, things such as chores. This is what I have, but I really want to make it stronger
so wat can i do here
Well, can you help me create the introduction paragraph? I think I can do the rest, but I'm stuck on introducing it and creating my hook
ill try
Thanks ^_^
i think they shold be given allowence to fulfill their needs and stuff
The decision to give a child allowance is up to his/her parents, but there are many benefits to giving a child an allowance. An allowance may seem like an easy way to get money every week, but this is not the case when the child must do things in order to get the allowance, things such as chores. By earning an allowance by doing chores, the child will understand the value of money and get an idea of how the real world works. The child also will develop budgeting skills when he/she saves the money to buy a toy or product that cost more than usual. Finally, it can also help the child with their shopping skills, helping them find the product they want for the cheapest price possible. How's that?
its really good
Awesome:D I have to create the whole thing by 8:30 xD
i think u dont need help ur already good
Aw thanks c: I'm not sure if I should try to get research or go based on opinion for the draft
i think u will do pretty well
Thanks:33
how old r u
i asking cuz u write really goood
I'm 18 xD I thought of another example With the child having their own money, it could help them feel mature and independent Should I use that instead of one of my original points?
yes this is good too
But should I use it instead of one of my original points?
The way jobs work in today’s economy, the person does their job for a certain amount of hours and at the end of the week (sometimes two weeks), they get their paycheck. An allowance doesn’t have to be very different from that. The child just has to do a certain amount of chores over the course of the week and at the end of the week, cha-ching! The parent could even have them log in how long it takes them to do each chore. Now, not only does the child have money in their pocket, but they are also beginning to grow their knowledge of the economy and workforce at a young age which will help them in their later years. My second paragraph.
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