Question

I need to see if this email writing is correct, can someone help me?

Answer 1

To: Greta Targa greta.targa@gamma.com
From: Jim Morales jim.morales@gamma.com
Subject: REQ: Your assistance with the Gamma Fall Training Conference
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Hello Greta,

As you know, we have been busy planning the Gamma Fall Training Conference in Miami, Florida. Your assistance is needed to make this conference the best it has ever been. The following speakers have been already scheduled for the training sessions, Nicole Gold, will be speaking to us on Tuesday, November 12, about using Email and Instant Messaging Effectively. Anthony Mills is scheduled for Wednesday, November 13, to speak to about "Leading Groups and Teams. Here are their email addresses: n.gold@etc.com and tony.mills@sunbelt.net.

Please send each of these speakers an email and confirm the dates and topics. We need this information for the program. The program for the conference is scheduled to be at the printers by September 1, therefore these confirmations are needed immediately. Please give me a call if you have any questions.

Answer 2

Sounds great! But in the first paragraph there are a couple typos. "to speak to.." and Leading groups and teams ""<<