im not like perfection.
more like absolution.
ive been a good little girl.
ive been tucked away like a pearl.
now im out shining like a star.
the world has left me with a scar.
for all the world to see.
now its a part of me.

you are that scar the only part about me I hate

Question

im not like perfection.
more like absolution.
ive been a good little girl.
ive been tucked away like a pearl.
now im out shining like a star.
the world has left me with a scar.
for all the world to see.
now its a part of me.


you are that scar the only part about me I hate

demonickittenlover · Answer

@Wolfboy @summerforever21

wolfboy · Answer

If i understand this (and please correct me if im wrong) this is talking about the fact that someone both hates and loves where they are in the world or whats going on. This is a good peice tho it does need some work. I belive if it had a tittle and more lines this would be much better but i can still see that you put work and effort into it and i appreciate that. Keep up the good work :D

anonymous · Answer

I like it, though I do agree with @Wolfboy it needs a little work. Keep up the good work though :D

demonickittenlover · Answer

thanks guys any ideas on a name and maby an ending?

anonymous · Answer

You inspired me to start writing again! <3

wolfboy · Answer

Thats always a good thing! :)

anonymous · Answer

wow thats really good, i'm a writer too.

anonymous · Answer

This is great! ☺ I really loved this.