I am doing an analysis of the communist manifesto. I want to know if my paper looks alright.

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venomblast · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

The 2nd paragraph the word work needs an ED on the end.

anonymous · Answer

author also needs a s on the end of it in the same sentence

anonymous · Answer

Are you there? here are the corrections and mistakes i found.

venomblast · Answer

i updated mine a little. made huge changes.

venomblast · Answer

i dont know, but should i put the last sentence of the 1st paragraph in the 2nd paragraph?

venomblast · Answer

I still have not wrote a thesis yet -_-. i got so much to do

venomblast · Answer

is this a good thesis? The goal of Communist manifesto, is to make the world in the direction to communism without having a social class being superior to the other.