I need help fixing my personal statement please! The UC prompt is "Describe the world you come from -- for example, your family, community or school -- and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations." How can I make my opening better? "Hey I never come out in our family pictures or film! Joselin why don't you be our photographer for today?" "Sure that sounds like fun."

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The world didn't change me, I changed my self because i'm extraordinary and I help shape the world. that is what i would put