Question

How does this sound?

Answer 1

It sounds amazing ;D

Answer 2

I'll never be perfect
I'll never give in
They're trying to change me
I can't let them win
I was so different in those days
Before I knew you
They never understood
They'd say "It's okay you'll pull through"
I was such the good little girl
Locked myself away
So afraid
Of the world
But now I'm shining like a star
Because of I've come so far
You helped me live
You helped me learn who I am
You showed me what it's like not to give a d****
And maybe for now
We can't be together
And though were apart
Please remember
You're in my heart.

Answer 3

I enjoyed reading this, it was very interesting :)

Answer 4

Thanks.

Answer 5

Do you have more? i'll be glad to read more.

Answer 6

Idk... I can look for my older poems.

Answer 7

I can't find them... sorry :(

Answer 8

it's good but not excellent, there are very few people who can write like shakespear

Answer 9

I wasn't trying to write like shakespear?

Answer 10

I enjoyed reading it very much, i think you did a really good job on it

Answer 11

Yes, it sounds wonderful. I can't write poems myself but I've read quite a few and yours is nice.

Answer 12

The thing is you are straight >.> and chu wuves second hand serandae n chu like screamo ._. ish me ish the only ones who knew who are you >.> <.< ._.

Answer 13

im so confused... who r u?