Question

can someone please edit my paper?

Answer 1

you need 2 more paragraphs

Answer 2

My question is, do your words vary and are they relevant? Also, does your writing have a focus and is it in proper order? Check for punctuation.

Answer 3

I should've said that it suppose, to be long paragraph of analysis/evaluation of one of the company that T3, advertisiting agency in Austin, is helping

Answer 4

not an essay. My writing is in proper order in term of summarizing the T3 aid agency and then going on to describe Coca-Cola campaign/evaluation. Could you edit the paper please?

Answer 5

There too many grammatical errors and sentence structure problems. I can't even bring myself to fix all of them.

Answer 6

Thanks sammm!

Answer 7

i would put another paragraph in there if i were you