Question

Think about which sources you might use to support your essay in response to the following question: Your thesis will directly answer the question:

"In what ways did religion and economic influence the development of medieval Europe and Japan?"

Your body paragraphs will support the thesis that you have developed.

Answer 1

"Christianity and the feudal system in Europe and Shintoism/Buddism and a similar structure to the feudal system in Japan" Now you have to turn this into a thesis. So like: Christianity and the feudal system in Europe and Shintoism/Buddism and a similar structure to the feudal system in Japan influence the development of medieval Europe and Japan. I wouldn't do that though, it looks last minute. So let's change the wording. The ways religion and economics influence the development of medieval Europe and Japan was by Christianity and the feudal system in Europe, while Shintoism/Buddism and a similar structure to the feudal system in Japan. It's rough but a start. I'd advise you to re-fix that thesis because I would never use it directly like that."

Answer 2

okay thank! :D

Answer 3

thanks*

Answer 4

Anytime.