3 Page Allegory....I need some opinions!

I'm currently brainstorming ideas for my allegory that is supposed to "comment on contemporary society." I want to write about how much the government controls the general public, and most people don't think twice. So my idea for characters is having the Father (government) control what his tow or three children (citizens) learn and do.

Do you think this is a good idea? Any suggestions? Thanks!

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3 Page Allegory....I need some opinions!

I'm currently brainstorming ideas for my allegory that is supposed to "comment on contemporary society." I want to write about how much the government controls the general public, and most people don't think twice. So my idea for characters is having the Father (government) control what his tow or three children (citizens) learn and do. 

Do you think this is a good idea? Any suggestions? Thanks!

anonymous · Answer

Personally I think that is a super good idea! I dont think i would change much about it.  Its really good!