Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Leah grabbed her purse and got on the bus. She pulled out her phone to text her friend. Someone on the bus asked her about her phone. The bus arrived at the mall, and Leah got out. She had forgotten her purse! @FLVSenglishstudent

Question

Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Leah grabbed her purse and got on the bus. She pulled out her phone to text her friend. Someone on the bus asked her about her phone. The bus arrived at the mall, and Leah got out. She had forgotten her purse! @FLVSenglishstudent

anonymous · Answer

wait let me see.. 

okay I was asked the same thing but different topic.. look

anonymous · Answer

Is okay , I kinda understand it . what about this one Invent dialogue and revise the following paragraph. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Darius ran into his teacher at the grocery store, and they talked about his class project. Their conversation made him decide to do his project about gourmet cooking.

anonymous · Answer

yay thanks (:

anonymous · Answer

No problem :)

anonymous · Answer

can you help with this one ?
Select the temporal transition that would be best to show suspense. 

 "With reference to..." 

 "In the distance..." 

 "In the same way..." 

 "All of a sudden..."

anonymous · Answer

@кαяεn_ℓσvεℓyღ its D 
" All of sudden" . I'm % sure , i just took this quiz.